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One.
It was raining;
but I couldn't feel the rain;
Because all I was left to do;
was feel me besides you;
.
Two.
It was warm;
and the stars showed themselves like;
they knew no wrongs;
and I held your hand like;
if I let it go; the sun might fall;
.
Three.
You drenched my world in night;
you cloaked me with the general feeling of blind;
you left me scatter-brained;
[but mostly, you left me empty handed;
the sun won't come up today.]
.
Four.
You made me think of paper cranes;
you touched me like you'd never felt love before;
and I smiled against the feel of your lips;
like I could teach you;
.
Five.
you made me feel like fire;
was dancing across my skin, up to my elbows;
at the very mention of your name;
and one day;
when you ceased to exist in my life;
you made me forget not only how to feel fire;
but warmth;
.
Six.
you taught me;
to breathe;
and let go;
and then you taught me;
to guard my dreams;
and then you were gone;
Seven.
It's still dark;
and no matter how hard he tries;
his light can never compare to yours;
.
Eight.
I am but lost;
I would say though;
mostly;
I'm blinded;
.
Nine.
There was hope in every callous of your palm;
.
It was raining;
but I couldn't feel the rain;
Because all I was left to do;
was feel me besides you;
.
Two.
It was warm;
and the stars showed themselves like;
they knew no wrongs;
and I held your hand like;
if I let it go; the sun might fall;
.
Three.
You drenched my world in night;
you cloaked me with the general feeling of blind;
you left me scatter-brained;
[but mostly, you left me empty handed;
the sun won't come up today.]
.
Four.
You made me think of paper cranes;
you touched me like you'd never felt love before;
and I smiled against the feel of your lips;
like I could teach you;
.
Five.
you made me feel like fire;
was dancing across my skin, up to my elbows;
at the very mention of your name;
and one day;
when you ceased to exist in my life;
you made me forget not only how to feel fire;
but warmth;
.
Six.
you taught me;
to breathe;
and let go;
and then you taught me;
to guard my dreams;
and then you were gone;
Seven.
It's still dark;
and no matter how hard he tries;
his light can never compare to yours;
.
Eight.
I am but lost;
I would say though;
mostly;
I'm blinded;
.
Nine.
There was hope in every callous of your palm;
.
I haven't written like this in a while, in that mental state. Huh, now back to homework. Pretend this never happened please.
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Beautifully written, I especially loved this part:
you touched me like you'd never felt love before;
and I smiled against the feel of your lips;
like I could teach you;
Beautiful
you touched me like you'd never felt love before;
and I smiled against the feel of your lips;
like I could teach you;
Beautiful